impossible

[درام الحب]

hAlOoOo
I like to share with you something and I hope all of you will love it



how can i say i love you
and stay a way from you
It's impossible to do

how can i find my joy away
and my life pass
day by day
away from you

why you pash me to my future
while you are my love and life

Itis hard to do
this world kill me
this life is hard

i don't want it

i know it is hard for you to understand my difficulty and finding joy.... because i'm away ..... away from you

how can i ever reply you
it is impossible to do


my best wishes
DrAm Al 7oB

[بنت القوافي]

hi dram al 7ub
thank you for enjoying us with your writings
i want to advise you to chek your spelling and to check you grammer
you are a good writer and you can be better if you took my advise
please accept it from me as a sister
thank you again

[درام الحب]

Thanks sis

and I will do your advice

But
Can you tell me what is my mistake?

If you can

darma al 7ob

[بنت القوافي]

how can i find my joy away
and my life pass
day by day
away from you
(your mistake here is that you wrote( how can i find my joy away
when there is no need for (away ) and
you shoud have written how can i find my joy while my life passes day by day away from you and
since your sentence started with the verb present then you shoud contiue with it
what i mean is that you shoud have written (passes) instead of pass
why you pash me to my future
while you are my love and life
your spelling in the word (pash) is wrong it shoud be( push) and it shoud be( why are you pushing me to my future )and the word( when) is more suitable than the word( while) in this sentence (why are you
pushing me to my future when you are my love and life)

Itis hard to do
this world kill me
this life is hard

i don't want it
here you shoud write( this world is killing me) instaed of what you wrote

i know it is hard for you to understand my difficulty and finding joy.... because i'm away ..... away from you
here you shoud have written (i know it is hard for you to understand my difficulty )and stop then you start (and finding joy ........because i'm away .....away from you is hard )or(is impossible


how can i ever reply you
it is impossible to do
in your writting you are the one who is talking so you shoudn't write how can i reply because you are already talking
do you know what i mean

i hope that you won't get up upset from me for fixing your mistakes and i will always be here if you need me
your sis
bint alqawafi