*$---(special night)---$* By Shajon Elil

[شجون الليل]

Special Night


Hold me tie for the rest of the life
Let a dream become true
You and me surrounded by motions
The night is long and we’re on
Let our feelings express tonight
The night goes on lets wake up inside
Let make it a special night to remember
Hold me now make me feel you
Make my feeling mix up and down
Reach me to the top dont make me down
I know you can hold me for the rest of the life
Make a dream become real
And let our feelings go on
Show me now how can you make a dream real
Let it become a special night


Written By Shajon Elil

I Hope you like it As Well

[شجون الليل]

:marsa106:why nobody say something:marsa106:

:marsa39: is my poem that bad

[riam96]

It is all have a same words and same ideas



only i can get top ,down and night



can you use more feeling words


sorry :P

[شجون الليل]

It seems you didn’t figure out what I aimed from this poem :marsa123:

Or what my words mean

Yes its fact that I used simple words to write it, however, these words

are hiding a view or describing sort of motions that’s recognized by people

:marsa48: Who are interested in English poems


The English poem is completely different than the Arabic poem:marsa168:

When you are welling to repeat words that means you want to send a message for the readers:marsa109:

So if get what this poem means

You will not say this thing:marsa116:


That’s why I said you didn’t get the bottom line of the poem:marsa175:


This is the obvious fact:marsa29:

Sorry you push me through it
:marsa182:

[riam96]

omg



:marsa86: :marsa86: I thought that you asked about hour opinion >>>are not you?



Sorry if my opinion was disappoint you or destroying you

Nevertheless, I am sure you know that I under stand what you mean :marsa54: :marsa110: :marsa107:

Night motions :marsa188: :marsa97:

:marsa135: :marsa135: :marsa135: :marsa135: :marsa135: :marsa135: :marsa135: :marsa135:

[شجون الليل]

:marsa131: I do want you views


:marsa69: but why dont you say your opinion respectively & gently :marsa69:


:marsa83: Hhm


:marsa98: but you got the idea after I told you:marsa98:


:marsa131: Denying

[زعيم المرسى]

Hi My baby...I like any thing from u.......But this poam.....No no no
:marsa160: Sorry but I will say it is very nice

[شجون الليل]

Za3emo0o

:marsa142:Thanx for your nice words:marsa142:
:marsa142:

[رصاصة]

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
really shjoon you are a good writter
nice poem and cool words


keep it up